why cant i breathe

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  1. Prisoner
    Botanique / Oct 17 2019 10.46

    this poem is a bit abstract and im not sure what you will take from it but from my heart its about letting people know my hurt and how I see my life going but also about wishing that I had a life different to this so my life wouldn't go the way I see it heading but I hope that some how you can see what I was attempting to project but I also want you to take it in your own way however that may be and I would like to know because it fascinates me how the words of one soul can reflect on a different outcome.

    when my heart is beating fast

    and I cant see in the glass

    my reflection has disappeared

    but my hate has reappeared

    I stand upon this broken ground

    that cant withhold the sound

    that my lungs just want to cry out

    that my bones are reaching out

    I cant stand the thought of drowning

    or that of an individual frowning

    I wish only I could breathe again

    to comfort and be with them

    my heart will only tick for now

    but one day it will settle down.

    I wish to only be what I once was

    I wish to be the angel that stood above

    if only my heart could beat again

    of only you where my best friend

    maybe id be less alone

    maybe your smile will show

    and your mind would overflow

    with the understand I wish you would know

    but my heart will be overgrown

    by the love that I once I knew

    ill never seen to this day

    but maybe when I rest at bay

    I could be reminded of my childhood

    times when I could smile through all the hurt

    smile through all the secrets and lies I told

    and maybe be at bed again

    when I used to make good friends.

  2. Scientist
    FutureDoctor2021 / Oct 21 2019 11.49

    hi i loved your poem very much hope youvfeel better talk to an adult they can help

  3. Prisoner
    FutureDoctor2021 / Oct 21 2019 11.49

    hi i loved your poem very much hope youvfeel better talk to an adult they can help

    Botanique / Oct 21 2019 15.52

    thank you so much and sometimes adults just dont understand but i am trying just not succeeding very well

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    Botanique / Oct 17 2019 10.46

    this poem is a bit abstract and im not sure what you will take from it but from my heart its about letting people know my hurt and how I see my life going but also about wishing that I had a life different to this so my life wouldn't go the way I see it heading but I hope that some how you can see what I was attempting to project but I also want you to take it in your own way however that may be and I would like to know because it fascinates me how the words of one soul can reflect on a different outcome.

    when my heart is beating fast

    and I cant see in the glass

    my reflection has disappeared

    but my hate has reappeared

    I stand upon this broken ground

    that cant withhold the sound

    that my lungs just want to cry out

    that my bones are reaching out

    I cant stand the thought of drowning

    or that of an individual frowning

    I wish only I could breathe again

    to comfort and be with them

    my heart will only tick for now

    but one day it will settle down.

    I wish to only be what I once was

    I wish to be the angel that stood above

    if only my heart could beat again

    of only you where my best friend

    maybe id be less alone

    maybe your smile will show

    and your mind would overflow

    with the understand I wish you would know

    but my heart will be overgrown

    by the love that I once I knew

    ill never seen to this day

    but maybe when I rest at bay

    I could be reminded of my childhood

    times when I could smile through all the hurt

    smile through all the secrets and lies I told

    and maybe be at bed again

    when I used to make good friends.

    rocky2294 / Oct 24 2019 18.54

    Do you want to talk about it??

    It sounds like you struggle a lot??

    kira xx

  5. Prisoner
    rocky2294 / Oct 24 2019 18.54

    Do you want to talk about it??

    It sounds like you struggle a lot??

    kira xx

    Botanique / Oct 27 2019 14.50

    thank you so much Kira thats really sweet of you to offer that and it means a lot i really do appreciate it and yes i am struggling a lot but im trying to get better with everything

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